Phonar -Transformative storytelling task

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  1. Once more brilliant!
    Maybe the music is a bit loud, your speaking is not very clear in some moments.

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    • Thanks, yeah i was getting that too! Think i may use this as a rough idea for a future more developed version! Thanks for the comment!

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  2. Ava

     /  November 7, 2012

    This was very well done with beautiful story telling. I have to agree about the music a little too loud but otherwise great work!

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  3. Another lovely sketch Sean and I guess the music is you too? Astonishing that you guys are doing this on a weekly basis and often using brand-new skills. I particularly loved the pace of the language when it really ran out of you, some of the turns of phrase were just great . This could be polished up into something really special – maybe re think the pacing of the images, rework the language a little, work with Paul on the levels, but most of all – I would love to see a version where you don’t resolve the tension. I’d love to see a version where you talk about the day before but don’t reveal what actually happens.

    Thanks Sean, jw

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